This is my persuasive writing about animal abuse needs to stop. What we did was research about our topic to find proper information. The thing I found challenging was finding proper information because some fake information.
Tuesday, 7 August 2018
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Ya it does need to stop.
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you commenting on Edsylia's blog Coral. Can you expand your comment so that it includes something positive, thoughtful and helpful. The comment you have left about abuse needing to stop is a thoughtful one because it shows that you have taken time to consider Edsylia's arguments but you need to expand your comments to give her useful feedback.
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